It has been a tough week. As you may know we missed 5 class hours due to Level Change Exam and the bomb explosion in Ankara:(( Thus, we are behind the schedule.
We have revised some vocabulary related to the weather in Module 2a:
Temperature
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Sun
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Rain
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Mild
Chilly
Freezing
Boiling
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Shine
Clear skies
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Shower
Drizzle
Pour
Wet
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Wind
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Cloud
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Storm
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Blow
Breeze
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Foggy
Overcast
Dull
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Thunder
Lightning
Blizzard
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Other new words are as follows:
Block (v)
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Bystander
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Jungle
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Land (v)
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Overturn
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Resident
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Skid
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Slide (v)
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Violent
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We have had the chance to compare Simple Past and Past Continuous Tense. Check the irregular verbs here.
Simple Past vs. Past Progressive Tense
The past progressive talks about something that was happening before, but for a period of time. It uses was or were + verb-ing like was eating or were playing. It gives a background for something that was happening while a different event happened.
Example: While I was eating, the telephone rang.
So, during the time I was eating (let's say from 6:30-7:00 p.m.) somebody called my house (let's say they called at 6:49p.m.) One thing happened (simple past) during the period of time another thing was happening (past progressive.)
Here is another example: They saw an old man as they were walking down the street.
You can think of walking as a video. You see the movement. You see the time passing. Think ofsaw as a photo. It is one point of time. You don't think of the time passing.
I dreamed in English when I was sleeping.
She was listening to the radio when the mail came.
They visited Sydney when they were traveling in Australia.
Here is a link to practice Past Simple and Past Continuous.
When /While /As
We use when, while and as to talk about situations or actions that occur simultaneously.
1. They can be used to introduce a longer action or situation, which was / is going on when another situation occurred / occurs.
As I was sleeping, the door bell rang.
While you were studying, your friend called you.
Note: The main clause and as / while clauses can be in reversed order.
The doorbell rang as I was sleeping.
Your friend called you while you were studying.
Note:
Continuous tense is preferred for the longer action or situation (was eating / are walking) however note that we can use “as and while” with a simple tense with a state verb. (sit, grow, be)
As I was at home, the postman came.
2. We prefer while to talk about two simultaneous actions that go / went on together.
While I was a taking shower, my mother was cleaning the attic.
My mother was cleaning the attic while I was taking a shower.
Note: we can also use simple tenses for the same meaning.
While I took a shower, my mother cleaned the attic.
3. We prefer as to talk about two things that change together in time.
As you eat more, you will gain more weight.
As you study more, you will get better grades.
4. We use when to talk about phases of life.
When you were a kid, you used to be so shy. (not while or as)
5. We prefer (just) as to talk about two consecutive events or actions that occurred simultaneously.
As he opened the drawer, he took out an old photo.
Just as my father came in, the phone rang.
6. We use reductions with when and while.
Don’t forget to take a map with you when going camping.
Tell me when ready.
While a student, I used to live with me family.
Module 2b
As you may remember we read 'The Dakar Rally' and covered the following vocabulary.
annual
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Assist-Assistant
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Attend-
Attendant
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Breathtaking
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Compete-
Competitor
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Contest - Contestant
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Convention- Conventional
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Cyclist
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Edit-Editor
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Endure-Endurance
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Extraordinary
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Fatal
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Incident
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Instruct-Instructor
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Journal-Journalist
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Land (n,v)
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Measures
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Mud
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Organize -Organizer
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Participate- Participant
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Race (n,v)-Racer
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Remain
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Sand dune
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Spectator
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Tough
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Train - Trainer
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Challenge (n, v)
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Distance
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Finalist
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Lead-Leader
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Quad
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Test (n,v)
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Remember the following suffixes help you understand the part of speech.
-er: loser, trainer, leader, reporter, traveler, .....
-or: instructor, survivor, editor, visitor,....
-ist: cyclist, finalist, journalist, ...
-ant: contestant, attendant, assistant, ....
“No more”, “no longer”, “not anymore”
We use no longer or not any longer to talk about the end of an action or state. No longer is more formal:
One day I could stand it no longer.
I couldn’t stand it any longer. I walked out and didn’t go back.
No longer often comes in the normal mid position for adverbs (between the subject and main verb, or after the modal verb or first auxiliary verb, or after be as a main verb), especially in more formal styles:
She no longer wears the dull colours of her former life and now dresses in bright, fashionable clothes.
In very formal styles, we can use no longer in front position, with the subject and verb inverted:
No longer does he dream of becoming famous. He knows his life will be very ordinary.
No longer or not any longer are the opposite of still.
Compare
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She isn’t working here now.
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She is working here now.
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We use Not any longer as a response on its own. However, we don’t use No longer as a response on its own:
A:Are you still living in London?B:Not any longer.
You love me no more.
You no longer love me.
You don't love me anymore.
No more and not any more are determiners and adverbs.
No more, not any more as determiners
We use no more and not any more as determiners to talk about an absence of something that was once there. No more is more formal thannot any more:
I will ask no more questions. (formal)
I won’t ask any more questions. (informal)
There’s no more cake. They’ve eaten it all. (or There isn’t any more cake.)
No more, not any more as adverbs
We use no more and not any more as adverbs to talk about something stopping or ending. No more is more formal than not any more:
The army has arrived. We should fear no more. (formal)
I wouldn’t worry any more if I was you. Everything will be okay. (informal)
No more … than, Not any more … than
We use no more … than or not any more … than to talk about comparative quantities and degrees. No more than is more formal thannot any more than:
It does not tell you much. There is no more detail than in the instructions.(formal)
Flying there isn’t any more expensive than getting the train. (informal)
Part 1: Writing
A: Read the writing task and the story on page 24. Answer the questions below:
What did Paul and Frank wonder?
What was the weather like?
Where were they?
Could they use the car or their cell phones?
How did they feel?
What did they decide to do?
What happened to Paul as they were walking?
Could he walk?
What did Frank decide to do?
Why did Frank stop after a while?
What did they decide to do?
What did Paul do?
Was he in pain?
Was his ankle swollen?
Why was Frank scared stiff?
What did he see a moment later?
Who was it?
How did Frank feel?
B: Use the time linkers below and complete the exercise on page 25.
When
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At first
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Just as
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While
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In the beginning
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Till/until
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As
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During
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Immediately
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As soon as
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Soon
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Finally
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Before
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Later
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In the end
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After
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Then
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After that
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At that moment
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After a while
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A moment later
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C: Read the writing task and complete the outline story on page 25.
D: Look at the plan taken from page 133 below, use the TIP on page 25 and write your story by 18.10.2015 by 17:00
PLAN
Introduction : Describe the setting of the story (time, place, weather, etc.) and introduce the main character(s).
Main Part (2-3 paragraphs): Mention what happened, what the character(s) did, saw, heard, said, etc. and how they felt.
Conclusion: Describe what happened in the end and make a short comment.
Part 2: Review- Complete the Review Section on page 26
Part 3: Workbook Module 2- Complete Module 2 in your Workbook
Have a nice weekend.....

Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. When she woke up, she was not at her home. She was in a strange house. She was not able to remember last night. She looked outside from the window. The weather was dull and foggy. She decided to go outside and she wanted to undersand what was going on.
YanıtlaSilAt first, she looked around. She tried to find someone. She walked for 5 minutes in road. Suddenly she tripped over a rock and injured her knees. Her knees were bleeding. She was terrified. Then she started to cry. She expected typical Monday morning, she drank coffee and went to work. However she felt helpless.
A moment later, she saw two men coming towards her. There were knifes in their hands. She started to run far away but she did not know where she was running. A few minute later she realized a police car. When she reached the car, she fainted.
The policeman took her to a hospital. When she woke up, her family was in hospital too. She was not upset any longer. She got rid of that strange day. In the end she went home with her family.
Ceren Kaneral
Dear Ceren,
YanıtlaSilThank you for being so quick:) Apart from some minor mistakes, it seems great.
Have a nice weekend!!!
PS:Pay attention to the following explanation:
last night --- the previous night
punctuation (Suddenly,/Then,/ However,/ A moment later,/ A few minutes later, / In the end,)
knifes-----knives
a hospital---- the hospital
in hospital-----in the hospital
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning,but she was wrong.She got breakfeast as everytime and got the same bus which she goes to work everday with.But this time she realized that bus was empty however she didnt care too much. She looked outside and weather was cloudy and she started reading her book.
YanıtlaSilWhile she was reading she sunddenly realized bus was going to wrong side.She decided talking to driver but no driver was on bus. She couldnt believe her eyes how the bus was going? She scared too much because she didnt know what to do .
Stop button was not working she cant get off the bus. She wandered what was going on. She didn’t know what to feel, she scared, she was suprised, What was the reason for all this non-sense. Was that a alien kidnaping or maybe a CIA trap due to her secret project that she has been working on for a while or maybe it was just a dream.
What ever it was, she didn’t care, she smiled and sit back to her own seat and continued reading her book up to the last stop of the bus.Sometimes there are some thing that we cant control so just live and read book
Hasan Bulut SUİÇMEZ B1 06
Dear Hasan,
YanıtlaSilInteresting story...
Have a look at your story and focus on some points like punctuation, missing object(s), artciles, and the like.
Best
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. When she woke up and walked into the bathroom, she heard a strange noise. The weather was rainy and she tought it was a lightning but that sound came from the kitchen. She was a little bit scared. She walked to the kitchen slowly. When she arrived the kitchen, she terrified what she saw. The window was completly open. That was so weird because her home protected by security system.
YanıtlaSilThan suddenly she heart whispers coming from downstairs. Tina was horrified. She ran to her bedroom as quiet as possible. She was trying to find her cell phone but it wasn't there. The sounds started again. She had no choice. She opened the window and jump into the garden. While she ran away to her neighbor, she was screaming. In that moment Tina saw 2 man on the second floor window. A minute later all neighbors gathered there and also police was coming but two man already drove away by their car.
The odd one, nothing has stolen from the house and witnesses said there was no car in front of the house.
Tina thought it would be a typical monday morning but she was wrong. It was a cold day. She had breakfast, dressed up and leaved home. Despite the monday she was happy because she loves her job. Let me tell you about Tina. Tina was 28 years old cop. His father was also a cop. 16 years ago his father killed by a drug dealer. After his father's tragic death, Tina decided to become a cop.
YanıtlaSilIn afternoon, Tina went out for patrol. When she was looking around she saw an old criminal. He was a drug dealer. Tina followed the drug dealer. The drug dealer met a man. When Tina saw the man's face she shocked. Because he was the killer of her father. He never got arrested because of lack of evidence but Tina was sure he was the killer.
Tina called the station immediately. Tina's colleagues came and arrested the 2 drug dealers.
End of the tiring day, Tina was happy and relieved.
Fatih Furkan Uluçay
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She was living with her schoolmate who named Alice. They were living in their house, this house was a small flat but it wasn't a problem for them. After that information part I want to talk about the story.
YanıtlaSilTina woke up early because Tina and Alice planned a meeting with their friends. When Tina woke up, she heard a voice, she listened it carefully, that was a voice of an ambulance siren. She went to her windowsill but she couldn't believe her eyes, Alice had a car accident and she was lying on the floor! Tina went to the crime scene quickly but it was too late for Alice. One day later, everyone was at Tina's house. Tina and Alice's friends were crying and family members were trying to stop Tina's crying.
Tina woke up sweaty and she realized that, it was just a nightmare. When she went to Alice's room, Alice was sleeping silently. Tina took a deep breath and smiled.
Halit Arıkan
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. .She leaved her school and everything seems normal. When she was walking in backstreets a man suddenly hit her and he asked: Did you know where is my little sister? She saw the knife in his hand. She thought he is an old man he couldn’t run too fast. She started to escape from him. Her father was working in military and he showed something to her. She stopped in a corner of a sreet. She didn’t know where she is. She thought this man couldn’t let her to go and she pulled her knife what her father gave it to her. She turned other side of corner and she saw he was still running. She trow her knife to him. He fell the ground and his blood began to spread on the sidewalk. She went out and started to scream. She was screaming about she is innocent. She felt bad. Polices arrested her and they questioned her: what happened? Why we found your fingerprints in a body? She told everything and polices decided she was innocent. They let her go. They don’t look her house. She was a serial killer. She was cutting the throat of innocent people and keeps their head in her basement. The man who was tring to kill her, he was looking for his little doughter and someone told him: found the Tina. Everyone knows Tina is a serial killer but they couldn’t say it to polices. If they told the polices, polices didn’t believe them. Someone told to her father: your doughter is a killer. He looked her house and he was shocked. He thought: I’ve created a monster and I must clean it. He killed her doughter when she was came home. He went the police station and surrendered.
YanıtlaSilEnes ERGÜN
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong.The day started like being everyday. In the morning she made her coffee and took some biscuits.And she was ready for school. She had an exam at 9 o'clock.But that day , she was feeling different cause she had a beautiful dream last night. She saw her grandma who died a year ago and her grandma was smiling to her . Her grandma was sitting on the poplar's branch.Suddenly she turned into a purple bird and the bird was going to rise and flied her around.It was a strange dream.
YanıtlaSilWhile she was walking in a park, she saw that poplar.It was the same poplar in her dream. Poplars are called ''tree of life'' in Shamanism.And she saw that bird.She shocked and couldn't believe her eyes.She thought she went out of her mind.Was that bird could be her grandma ? Did that poplar give a life to her grandma ? But she could never know the truth. Finally the bird flied away and Tina went to her home.
Tina woke up at 5 o'clock and remembered her exam at 9. She realized all of that she lived was a dream. She thought that day would be a weird day.
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, bus she was wrong. Just like every Monday, she woke up at 6 AM and went to the kitchen for breakfast. Then, she realized something was wrong.
YanıtlaSilShe's belongings were everywhere. All house was messy and the front was open. That was very scary. She walked trough the living room and than saw him. There was a stranger man in the living room. He was tall and slim. He got dark short hairs and some tattoos in his arms. Tina was very scared and she cannot move for a few seconds. Than she screamed.
Stranger turn around and saw Tina. Than he starts running and left home. It was a real shock for her. Than, after minutes she realized she had to call the police.
When police officers arrived, she was still nervous. They asked her a few questions and than start searching house for clues.
Luckily, nothing was stolen. After this, she changed his doors and started to be much more careful. That was a big lesson for her.
Çağla Karen Yetiz
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. It was Tuesday! As soon as she noticed that, she woke up from her bad. She had an job inteview today. She had to hurry up and go out. But the weather was like shower.
YanıtlaSilIn the begining, she thought that she could catch the bus. When she checked his app which is being used for buses's arrivals, she started to feel frustrated. She had missed the bus. Then, she saw some taxies, was coming to road. She tried to stop but he failed. Immediately, other taxi passed near from her and splashed rain water through to her. She was shocked and wet. She went back to bus station to wait the next bus and get dry.
A moment later, a friend of Tina, Michelle, saw her at bus station. The rain was finished and sun was shining. Michelle invited Tina to her car. Tina was narrating what happened to her while, she was driving car to where Tina's job interview. Luckily, They reached to the place on right time. Tina was like "After the meeting, want me whatever you want. Thank you.".
In the end, Tina's interview did well. She had told happened things employers have been like "We are so sorry but it is good see your here.". Every thing turned to good purpose for her.
Göktuğ ÖCAL
Tina thought it would be a typical morning, but she was wrong. She woke up in a good mood o that day. Sun was shinning at outside but it was a bit chilly. Tina got ready to go to the office. She was a secretary in a company. When she arrived to her table in office,she got a phone call, it was her manager. He asked her to visit him. When they started talking, Tina couldn't believe her ears. The manager told her that, the company lost too much money that year, thats why they must end half of the workers jobs. She was totally shocked when she heared it. She was in debt. What would she do to pay all of them. Luckly she was working for that company for 10 years. Thats why they need to pay back to her little amount of money. Suddenly she decided to gamble with that money, because she thought that she didn't have other chance. She had no time to find a new well paid job. At the same night she went to a game. It was her best day. She won the best amount of money. The next day she paid back all of her debts and she was grateful to her company. She decided to be a part of the company again and she bought the whole company. She was the new owner.
YanıtlaSilHazal YILMAZ
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. While she was eating breakfast at her home, she noticed there was blizzard outside. So she was disappointed. Then her cell phone rang. This was her trainer who named Mark. He said ‘’I have bad news for you. If we will run today, you might injure yourself’’. However, Tina wanted to train. Barely, she convinced Mark.
YanıtlaSil3 hours later, they went to a national park for training. As they were running, suddenly Tina sprained her ankle because of icy ground. It was a real shock. Mark called ambulance but ambulance couldn’t come there. Consequently, Mark decided to carry Tina to the hospital. She suffered until they arrived to the hospital. Finally doctor bandaged up her ankle and doctor said ‘’you shouldn’t even walk along 2 week’’. Unfortunately, she had a competition 1 week later. She got frustrated. So she never went outside when it was blizzard.
Yusuf Ayan
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She was ready for going to work. She drunk her coffee and arrived her home. The weather was sunny and shining. While she was walking to bus station, she saw a child. The child was worried and she looked at Tina.
YanıtlaSilAt first, Tina didn't care him, she got on the bus in 8 a.m., but a moment later she decided to talk with the child. She got off the bus and walked to him. The child saw Tina, after that, he run away. Tina was following him until he stopped. He entered a blue door and disappeared. After a moment, she entered the door, saw a lot of stairs and stared to climb up. There was almost five hundred stairs. Then, she was in a garage and there was nobody.
She looked around, went to a grey car. It was unlocked. She got in the car, it started to fly soon. She was shocked. How did it do? While she was flying, she saw the child again. She drove to his car. He was with a man. The child jumped down suddenly, and at that moment Tina took him with her car. Later, they landed. The child said 'You must go, now.' Tina didn't understand anything, but she didn't think stay here. She climbed down and exited.
Finally, she was in street and she was still shocked. She got on the bus again. What time was it? She couldn't believe her eyes! It was 8 a.m. Was it a dream? She never knew that.
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning,but she was wrong.She woke up early to go to work.Everything was routine.She got up and looked out of the window.Outside was very dull.So she thought that, this morning wouldn't be nice.She was also right…
YanıtlaSilEvery morning she used to call her boyfriend Gale.Because she loved him and she wanted to hear his voice.After she had breakfast,she called Gale.But he didn't answer phone.She called again and again.Then she decided to call him later.Because she had to catch the bus.When she opened the door to go out, she saw a letter.As soon as she saw it,she took it and began to read it immediately.While she was reading, she began to cry.She got frustrated.Because Gale has göne far away to start a new life.And Tina learnd that from just a letter.Gale has left her and she felt lonely.
It was a real shock.She had to deal with this difficult situation.She had to start her new life without Gale.But this wouldn't be easy for her.
Miray Demirkol
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She woke up 6 at a.m. as always, and then she went out. She loves sun rise and she went to sea side to watch it. Sky was clear and it was a little bit chilly.
YanıtlaSilAfter she arrived sea side she felt lonely and called her boyfriend to invite him. His name is John. John is a police officer and they are together for 3 years. While she was speaking with John, two stranger came near to her. When the conversation ended, they tried to steal her handbag. She screamed out many times but there was no one in this area. Thiefs were running and she was crying. While she was trying save her belongings she fell and broke her leg. She couldn’t run after them.
At this time John came with patrol car and saw everything. He drove to thiefs and caught them while they were in a rest. He arrested both an sent them to police department. He took Tina’s belongings and brought them to Tina.
Tina was still crying. When she saw John, she stopped crying and got anger to him. She said “Where were you while they were stealing my handbag? What kind of a police you are?” John answered “Hshhh Stay calm I caught them and took your belongings. Now, come on we must go hospital for your leg.” She felt very embarrassed. She thought “she owe an apology to him” and she said “I’m so sorry. Forgive me.” John answered “There is no problem, you were in shock. We are going hospital and you’ll be OK. I will take care of you all day.”
B1-06- Uscan Uskaner
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning,but she was wrong.She slept like a dead last night so she didn't know the situation about her country.When she woke up the weather was very dull and freezing.She opened the window but she couldn't see anybody or any vehicles.Tina was alone at home and she was afraid of.She didn't know that The Tird World War has started.
YanıtlaSilShe decided to call her mother but the phone was out of order.Tina worried more and more.She went outside to see somebody.She looked everywhere nevertheless she couldn't see anybody again.Suddenly she realized a tank.The tank came and came closer.A soldier appeared from inside the tank and shooted to Tina from her head.Tina dropped and died.
End of the day, American soldiers invaded all the city and celebrated this.
Aytuğ AKBAŞ
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning but she was wrong.The weather was dull and rainy. First she woke up and drunk her coffee. She wore her school uniform and left home for going to school.
YanıtlaSilWhile she was walking to bus station she saw a big dog on the street.Tina was shocked because dog started to come after her.First Tina trıed to changed her way but dog was still coming after her. And then she started to run,found a abandoned house and she got in.
When she got in the house she seen a man but he got dissapeared when he saw her.Tina started to follow him.The house was very big and they walked for a long time in the house.Tina tried to follow him but he got outside and he was gone before Tina can catch up.
After all this little adventure she was standing in the street again.She was still shocked but she tried to understood what happened to the man. Was he real or all of this was just a dream. She was very scared but she never learned this.
Beril Tümer
Tine though it would be a typical monday morning, but she was wrong.She woke up early.She would like to have a breakfast because she never loves monday mornings. She had to go to work. She canceled her thinking and look at the city from her window. She could not blieve her eyes.She saw something like a war. She frightened due to dead people. When she was thinking about that.Suddenly The door was ringed. When she looked at door hole, she saw her husband. However something changed. Her husband was like the walking dead's actor. She did not decide to what will she do.Then she did not open the door. Her husband was saying something as huagauhahaguahğ. She looked from window again. Too much helicopter was flying. And then a few helicopter approached and the soldier hurled a rope. Although she scared, she holded on to the rope. She ascended and arrived. First she asked to soldier that wear camouflage clothing. She was suprised for his answer.He said the walking dead came true. She was worried for what will happened tomorrow...
YanıtlaSilMehmet Akif SARI
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. Because the world was about a very bad situation. There was a virus outbreak outside. When Tina woke up, she went to the near the window and looked outside. She was afraid of what she saw at outside. Everyone was screaming and getting away from something. That was all horrible. Then she saw some people who was attacking to the running and scared people and biting them. They were probably zombies. Tine was afraid of this situation. Then, her home's door was being attacked by someone. She thought probably some of the zombies saw her when she was near of window. She was trying to find something to get out of this thing. But the door was opened and one of the zombies got inside quickly. Tine ran to the upstairs. But the zombie was following him. She went into her room and locked up the door. The zombie was trying to open the door. Soon the zombie complished to open the door. Tina thought everything finished, she would die. She chrouched near the table quickly and just looked to the zombie. When the zombie came to attack her, a gun was fired from somewhere. Zombie was shoted from his head then he fell to the ground. Tina was shocked. Then she saw someone near the door. He was a soldier. Tina was rescued by rescue team. After 3 years, outbreak has been disabled by goverments' army.
YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong.Befor starting the story,I am gonna tell you Tina.Tina is 55 years old.She lives by herself in a village.She’s tired of loneliness after her husband died and she deciced to get a cat.Her cat’s name is Max.Let’s start the story.It was sunny day.Tina woke up early and she went to the kitchen for breakfast.While she was walking to kitchen, she couldn’t see Max anywhere..Firstly,she tried to find at home but Max wasn’t at home.Tina had worried.She took deep breath and tried to calm down.Then,she deciced to call the police.
YanıtlaSilWhile she was talking with officer she said: “ My baby has been missing and I want him back.”When the policeman asked her to describe Max,she told him that Max had beautiful brown eyes,had all his teeth but was missing half of his left ear,and completely white.”Is Max your child or your pet?”the officer suspiciously asked.”He is my cat” Tina replied.The policeman said “ You are supposed to report missing persons,not missing cats”.And she asked “ who can I report this to?”.Policeman replied “ You can’t.You have to ask around your neighborhood or put up flyers.
Next day,Tina put up flyers somewhere.In the afternoon,someone had called and he had found it.Tina was also delighted to hear that.She met with the man who found Max and she took her cat back.
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday, but she was wrong.Thunder's sound had woked up Tina. Then she looked around.She was shocked.She was not remember here. She was in ancient house.Then she saw a mirror. Her face's is not Tina face. She didn't believe and She panicked. She said "This not real. I am in dream".A moment later. She saw herself.She came Tina and She said "You don't belong here".Tina shaked with fear. Tina said :
T-Who are you
A-I am Anit. How do you come here?
T-I don't remember.Where I am ?
A-You know this information.I must go. Sorry
T-Wait
A few hours later Tina calmed. She was exporing a house when she saw her book's. The she look carefully around.Then She said "This house is my home. But not same." She read daily. She didn't know this letter but she knew number.She saw date in diarly last page. She was 3000. She quickly exited this house. City was ruin. Nobody was in street.But she heared strange sound. Then She followed this sound. She went gigantic building. She saw Anit and few people.
T-I finally find you
A-You must talk president
T-Why ?
A-You will understand after that
30 minute later they found president
P- We wait a millennium for this moument.Every millennium, the person comes world. And Everything change. This world is previous
millennium's person piece. You are last hope. Everything is in your control.
T- What am I doing ?
P- We don't know but you know. I tell everything about this world.
New millennium had begun.
Emre Çatalkaya B1-06
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She didn't know anything waiting for her. At first, everything was normal.
YanıtlaSilTina woke up at seven a.m. like everymorning. The weather was sunny and beautiful. She prepared and ate something before going to work. She left home and went near her car. There was a note on the front window of the car. It was saying "Good morning, look at the side compartment of the car." She opened there in a hurry and saw and another note: "Drive to Cornerstone Cafe.". She couldn't know what must she do, but she decided to go to cafe. She was wondering what will happen, while she was driving.
Tina arrived cafe after fiveteen minutes and parked her car next to the road. She came front of the cafe and a waiter received her politely. Like all staff was working for her. Tina was very surprised and she could not understand anything.
Tina sat at a table and started to wait. In a minute, a waiter bring a piece of cake to her. At first, Tina waited and tried to understand, but everything was very strange. Tina could not endure more and she started to eat the cake. It was a strawberry cake, like her favourite. She thought, it couldn't be a random.
Suddeny, she felt something in her mouth. When she take it on her hand, a man, in a suit, came near the Tina's table. Tina was shocked, because he was Tina's boyfriend for five years whoose name is Trevor. Tina look at her hand for a second and she saw a ring. Then, Trevor knelt down front of Tina. After this, everything was clear for her. It was very romantic. Everybody in cafe got together around Tina and Trevor.
Trevor ask her to marry him. Now, everybody was waiting for Tina's answer in silence...
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning,but she was wrong.She woke up at 07:30.Than she washed her face and went shopping.The weather was overcast and windy.She saw her brother when she buying something for breakfast at the supermarket.
YanıtlaSilShe was shocked and she didn't believe.She looked him again carefully.Because her brother lost four years ago when they living in Paris.He is retarded child.
She search him two years but didn't find him.He was very dirty,his hair very long and his clothes dirty and very old.But she recognized him easily.Tom hadn't forgotten her.
They cried and cuddled.They dind't talk anything just cried and cuddled for five minutes.
They didn't associate anytime and Tina learned to be hopeful and don't despair.
Ahmet Bozkanat
Tina though it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. Like every morning, she woke up early at 5.45 AM in order to run on the beach. She leaves home as soon as she wore athletic wear. The weather was sunny. The sun was peculiarly shine.
YanıtlaSilThat day, she wanted to run on different a way. After, she set eyes on a banner about paragliding. She can not believe that and again she looked. It was her the biggest dream. She imagined since her childhood but course of paragliding will started at 7:30 PM today. She must attended the course absolutely.
She arrived to faster run home. Initially she changed clothes, she took a shower in the bathroom and leaves the house without makeup. She even forgot to have breakfast. Both she was excited this much first time and she wanted to finish work hours for go course.
Gülşah Ayaz
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She woke up and remembered her friend, Jane, would come. She looked out the window. She felt satisfied because the weather was sunny. She looked at the clock. It was too late. Because Jane supposed to be here in 20 minutes. As soon as she realized that, she flung out of the room and ran the stairs for breakfast. While she was descending the stairs, she fell over stair.
YanıtlaSilIn the beginning, she thought she could stand up, but she realized she sprained her ankle immediately. So she couldn't stand up. She was suffering so much. She wanted to call for help, but telephone was far away from her. Unfortunately, she couldn't progress to that.
When she noticed she couldn't anything, she only waited in agony. She hoped Jane would come quickly. A moment later she flashed how Jane would get in. Then she remembered there was a key under the mat in front of the door.
After 15 minutes Jane came and knocked. Tina drew breath when she heart Jane's voice. She called out to Jane, and ''Take the key under the mat and come in.'' she said. Jane came in quickly. When she saw Tina, she was in shock. ''Oh my! I can't believe my eyes.'' she said. She called an ambulance directly. As soon as the ambulance came, Tina was taken to the hospital.
Luckily, there wasn't a bad thing of the her ankle. She was feeling better. But she had never thought Monday would be a day like this.
Ezgi SEVİM
I'm sorry for my mistakes. I wanted to right one. As I couldn't see others. 3. paragraph, first line. It must be:
Sil-She couldn't do anything
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She woke up and looked at the watch. It was 7.
YanıtlaSilShe stood up and opened the window. The weather was dull; also, she didn't like it. When, she went towards the door, she saw bloodstains on the door handle. She was frightened. She didn't understand how it was done. Then, she decided to follow the bloodstains. It went towards bathroom. When she came to the bathroom, she couldn't believe her eyes. Because, the bedpan was full of blood. She screamed.
She went to her room quickly for call up police. But, suddenly, she saw a knife which had the bloodstains beside her brake pad. She was in shock. She had jitters. She couldn't understand eminently how it was happened, who made it, when it was hapeened.
She heart report. Suddenly, she opened her eyes. It was nightmare. She felt so bad. She looked at surroundings. It was 9 o'clock. It was late to work. But, it was not important. Because, she didn't feel good. She went towards kitchen for drink a cup of coffee. But, she wanted to look at bathroom. Because, she remembered that the bedpan was full of blood. Luckily, everything was fine. She wanted to forget it. Then, she drank cup of coffee. Finally, she felt good.
Berivan Kula
Tina thought it would be a typical Monday morning but she was wrong. At first, when she woke up, she was feeling pain in everywhere of her body. Espically in her kidney and in her head. It was seriously pain. She held her head and her back by herself. Suddenly, she recognized there was no her home. What was it? She couldn't believe her eyes. The place was like prison or cell. She was on the operating table. It was a real shock.There was dark and so cold. Tina shouted 'What happened to me? Where am I in? Is there anyone in the room. I can't stand up, can anyone help me to stand up?' Unfortunately she was kidnapped by someones. Then Rupper told 'Don't shout, no body can hear you!' and smacked to Tina's face. Tina was crying and remembered this voice. The voice of bad men was Rupper's. Rupper was new boyfriend who she met at the party. She understood that she was on worst statue. She remembered somethings before that night, she has drinked most of alcohol drinks during the party. She met a handsome guy who named Rupper. Rupper was the coolest of the party. Every girl might adore to him.
YanıtlaSilAnd Tina and Rupper met each other, Rupper offered to her drink his alcohol. She accepted this offer easily. Unfortunately she sleeped quickly...
Then she was expecting this morning may be nightmare or prank. She was praying to God, after that she promise by herself : "I 'll never be drunk, I'll never drink alcohol. Forgive me my God!" It was like nightmare but It was absolutely real. Tina has begged and has forgiven to Rupper. 'Please leave me!' She couldn't notice that her kigney was operated and taked by Rupper's friend.
Rupper was the member of organ mafia. He had had no mercy he would'nt leave her. There was one more men who has friend of Rupper. His name was Douglas. He was doctor. He has already took Tina's kidney. There was scar on the Tina's back. He has operated her and they have reached their goals. Tina felt incurable and strongless. If she get rid of them, she won't drink alcohol never. She was promising by herself during the event...
There was something that Rupper and Douglas forgot. "Tina's wisely watch."
When Rupper recognized that watch he shouted to Douglas "We finished, there is wisely watch on Tina's arm. We must go now, you tkae our weapons and I will take this kidney. We must be fast!" Tina's parents have already reported to police. Polices have already detected their area before they were going to there by cars.
Untill they were excaping, polices have already reached that area.
When the superintendent of polices shouted him "Give up,put your hands up. If you try to excape from us, we'll shot on you , they were starting to fire to polices.
Someone of polices was injured. Another polices started to frive mafia. Rupper and Douglas were hitted easily by polices. Rupper's hand and leg was blooding. He was crying 'don't kill me, I give up'. But there was no chance to Dougles. He has already died. He were killed by superintendent. One of Polices took Tina's kidney and took her to hospital. Tina was treated quickly...
Finally she got rid of this mafia. After this event she swear to God 'I'll never drink, I did some mistakes, forgive me my God.'
She didn't drink alcohol anymore, now she is still living. She prays everyday to God. She is so happy. That's all.
Uğur TATLIER
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YanıtlaSilTina thought it would be a typical Monday morning, but she was wrong. She woke up and went to kitchen for eat something.She make herself a toast and went to the living room.
YanıtlaSilTina looked outside from window and saw a tornado.She couldn't belive her eyes.Tina panicked and try to warn her family.She shouted but no one answered and she realize that she was alone at home.
She went outside for search for her family but she couldn't find them.Suddenly she heard a voice but she couldn't understand where it is coming from. When she looked up she saw a building was falling down...
All of sudden she find herself in her bed.She realize that was a nightmare and relaxed.then she continued her typical boring life.Make herself a toast and started to watching tv.
Birant Özek
There was a girl who didn’t like her appearance. She was praying all the time for beautifulness.
YanıtlaSilThe day came; Tina thought it would be a typial Monday morning, but she was wrong. She woke up, wore her slippers and went to the bathroom. She looked at herself and she shocked. She had a different appearance. She was looking like more beautiful. She looked her hands, body, feet… Everything was more beautiful. She liked it because, she didn’t like her appearance before she changed. There was nobody at home therefore she wore her uniformes quickly because she wanted to tell everything to her friends and show her new appearance. She was so excited.
She went to look outside. The weather was rainy so she had to take her umbrella with her. She also took her books, pencils, homework, perfume and identity but when she found her identity, something made her confused. Her photograph and name changed on it. Same parents, same birthday… Who did this? She was really confused. She liked her appereance but what is the necessary to change her name? Her new name was Katherine. That disturb her a little bit.
Katherine went down the stairs. There was a pastry shop under their apartment. Every morning she brightens herself while she smell the cookies’ and muffins’ smell however that morning she didn’t like it. One more thing has changed. She started to be sad. Maybe her enjoyments changed, too. She got in the school service and looked at outside until she went to school.
When she went to school, everybody was looking at her. She was very beautiful but she was not happy. When she saw her best friends, she went away from them. Everybody thought about her she was new. She remembered everything well but everything changed with her. She started to hate everything about her and “What makes me a person? My personality or my appearance?” she thought. She was very upset and nothing makes happy her what she loves anymore. “I soul didn’t change but I miss everything about me.”
Then, she woke up with a lot of sweat. She ran to the bathroom and “How do I seem beautiful like that?” she said and she decided to love herself , thought the most important thing is her soul.
I wrote it very fast but I noticed my mistakes now. Maybe there are more mistake but I wanted to correct them.
Sil*makes her happy
*my soul
Tina tought it would be a typical Monday morning but she was wrong. When she woke up , she wasn't at home. She scared so much. She wanted to go home. She saw a taxi. She stopped it. And She asked to the taxi driver where she was. The taxi driver laughed. And he said : We are in Adana center. Tina : İs this place famous. Taxi driver : Of course. She was curious and she called her mother by taxi driver's phone. She said : Oh mother do you know what happened yesterday? The mother said : How can i know? She finished the call and she called her bestfriend Samet. She asked to Samet : what happened yesterday. Samed said : We were at a bar. We were dancing and we got drunk. You were so desperate and you weren't able to walk by yourself so i decided to carry you to my home. You slept in my home. I went to supermarket to buy some coffee. When i came back , you weren't at my home. Tina said : Oh okey then , see you later. Samet finished the call . He stared to his medicine bottle , he laughed secretly and he said : HA HA HA I HAVE EXTRA KİDNEY KNOW !
YanıtlaSilTina though it would be a typical Monday morning,but she was wrong. She wasn’t aware of what was going to happen that day. It was raining outside. The sun was not shining and it was really cold. Tina’s room was really dark and there were a lot of pictures on her room’s walls.
YanıtlaSilAhmet Edip Kalyoncu
She woke up when she heard that her phone was ringinig. Her best friend Amie was calling. Tina answered her phone. Amie was angry to Tina because she woke up really late. ‘It’s eleven o’clock Tina!’ she shouted. Tina was feeling very bad because she forgot to wake up early. ‘Don’t be angry, i am sorry’ she answered but Amie was really angry and mad at her. Amie was a really good girl and they were best friends since high school. Tina was always sharing her secrets with Amie because she was very reliable. They were both blondes and they had a lot of things in common.
But even though they were best friends, Tina did not know that everything was going to change in that day. Amie had a big exam at 9 a.m in that morning and she was in need of Tina’s support. Because she was too excited. Unfortunately, Tina could not wake up early and she could not support her best friend. Tina had promised to Amie that she was going to be there on time but she could not. Amie was really sad because she got too excited in the exam and she could not answer the questions very clearly. Amie was thinking if her best friend Tina had woken up early, everything was going to be different.
Tina said: ‘I know that this exam was really important for you. I could not support you,please forgive me.’ But Amie was still angry and she did not accept her apology. Amie said: ‘I supported you when you needed my help, but you never did the same thing for me.’ Tina got really upset, she was really afraid of losing her best friend. She tried to speak but her voice was shaking. Then Amie said ‘nevermind, i don’t want to talk anymore’ and hung up the phone. Tina did not know what to do. She stayed in her room all day. It was still raining and cloudy.
We can understand in that short story that we should not get angry so easily because we may say somethings that we can regret after.
Ahmet Edip Kalyoncu
Silcerita tina thought it would be a typical monday morning , but she was wrong
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